Screenwriting : New to Stage32, looking for some direction and recommendations! by Alicia Charette

Alicia Charette

New to Stage32, looking for some direction and recommendations!

Hey everyone!

I’m new here and really excited to be in a community where we all get what makes a story truly shine.

I stumbled upon something I truly believe is made for TV—a family that feels completely authentic, without the polished, scripted feel. It’s the kind of dynamic that just can’t be created. It’s loud, chaotic, hilarious, emotional, and yet, it’s grounded in real-life challenges that truly matter.

At the heart of it is a mom who absolutely commands attention—unfiltered, bold, and naturally magnetic. She’s raising a family with big personalities and real complexities, and the way they navigate life together is unpredictable in the best way. It’s a world where a simple idea can turn into a fully booked trip in minutes, where every conversation could take a wild turn, and where humor and heart coexist perfectly.

I’ve started developing this as an unscripted/docu-series concept (think high-energy, character-driven, with real emotional depth), and I have a feeling this is something bigger than just an idea—it’s something people would actually watch and connect with.

I’m here because I want to take this seriously and do it the right way.

For those of you who have experience getting projects in front of producers or developing unscripted content:

• What’s the most effective way to get something like this seen?

• What actually makes a producer stop and pay attention at this stage?

• And what mistakes should I avoid early on?

I appreciate any insight—I’m looking forward to learning from all of you.

Thank you,

Alicia

Abhijeet Aade

Alicia Charette Welcome to Stage 32 this sounds like a really fun and naturally engaging concept. The authenticity and strong central personality you’re describing are definitely key strengths for unscripted content.

At this stage, I think what really helps is having a clear pitch package especially a strong concept summary, character breakdowns, and a sense of the format (episode structure, tone, and why it’s different from existing shows).

Producers usually respond to clarity and a unique hook, so the more you can define what makes this family stand out beyond just being entertaining, the stronger your pitch will be.

Also, capturing some sample footage or a short sizzle reel can make a big difference for unscripted projects.

Sounds like you’re on the right track best of luck with it!

Alicia Charette

Abhijeet Aade thank you so much! I do have a short sizzle reel that I posted here on the platform!

I have been working on creating a pitch package and have some of the components created already, just wondering what format it should be in, or how I would go about sharing, specifically on this platform?

Arlane Whitmore

Hi Alicia,

I was really intrigued by the concept you’re exploring. I’ve worked with a range of manuscripts, helping writers refine their stories and prepare them for publication, and I’d be glad to offer guidance or feedback if it would be helpful.

Are you currently drafting, or have you started revising? I’d love to hear more about your story and any parts where you feel extra guidance would make a difference.

Looking forward to learning more about your project.

Best regards,

Arlane.

Abhijeet Aade

Alicia Charette That’s great you’re already ahead if you have a sizzle reel and pitch materials ready.

For format, most people usually go with a clean pitch deck (PDF) something visual, concise, and easy to scan. You can include concept, characters, tone, episode ideas, and a bit about why it’s marketable.

On this platform, you can:

• Share a short post with the concept + hook

• Mention that you have a sizzle reel + pitch deck ready

• Invite people to DM you for the full package

You don’t want to overload the post just enough to spark curiosity.

Since you already have strong material, it’s really about presentation and positioning now.

Alicia Charette

Abhijeet Aade Ah yes, that makes perfect sense! This is exactly the direction I was looking for, thank you soo much!

After that is all said and done, I suppose the next step is to wait for the right eyes to come across, and hopefully reach out!

Abhijeet Aade

Alicia Charette Glad it helped!

I think waiting is definitely part of the process, but at the same time, it’s also about putting the work in the right places and staying active while it finds those “right eyes.”

Sometimes opportunities come from unexpected conversations or connections rather than just being discovered, so keeping the work moving and visible makes a big difference.

Alicia Charette

https://www.stage32.com/media/4040921364176054065

Link to sizzle reel! Would love feedback!

Akshat Yadav

Alicia, just watched the reel. There definitely is a whole lot of personality going on, and the reel helped me see glimpses of the vision you have in your heart, it’s clearly born from a very personal, authentic perspective.

To be authentic with you in return: I feel that this is more of a setup, and less of a story currently. Right now, it’s a collection of wholesome moments, which can be great for social media and such but difficult, I believe, for a thriving and continuing show. To move from a "concept" to a "buyable series," you would probably need to identify what lies at the root of all this goofy, daily drama: the conflict that propels characters, plotlines and arcs.

If the point is just 'living life,' I think you'd be undermining your potential. Something as promising as this needs more, a direction that ensures the audience returns for the problem, not just the people.

I saw your post while scrolling the lounge and couldn't help but notice the potential here. If you're down to connect, I'd be happy to just talk it out with you naturally.

Pat Alexander

For unscripted projects, look for producers who do or have done unscripted work before, as there's not always automatic crossover. A good way to get your work seen is via pitch sessions. One unscripted producer taking pitches coming up soon is Toni Bullock: https://www.stage32.com/happy-writers/pitch-sessions/Pitch-Toni-Bullock-...

David Taylor

It may be perceived as high risk unless it’s low budget but good luck.

Muhammad Abed Baryal

In my personal opinion, I don’t focus first on what others need or how they connect to the story or film. My priority is entertainment. The audience should be engaged and entertained first—this is where you can then embed deeper themes and meaningful ideas within that entertainment, so the audience connects with it naturally.

You know what I mean—like filmmakers such as David Fincher and Stanley Kubrick.

As for avoiding mistakes, I would say: if you want to write a truly great story, rewrite it again and again. Keep rewriting. And try to write it like a love letter—with passion and care.

Alicia Charette

Akshat Yadav thank you so much for your feedback! Yes! This is exactly what I need to do ! I knew when pitching the idea, that that’s exactly what I was doing, pitching a concept, that would need to be further developed into series. Which you are absolutely right, the point here isn’t just strictly about living life, there is soo much more beneath the surface. All of which I need to reframe into a more structured format, including conflict, plot lines, arcs, etc. Because I want it to be authentic as possible, this is where I am finding myself having difficulty. I could structure the concept based on things that have already happened, that have all of the aforementioned elements.

I would love to dive deeper if you wouldn’t mind DMing me when you have a moment!

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