There's a good connection between the protagonist's fear and the antagonist/creature, which sets up the personal stakes well. Check out this link as Tyler Mowery has a good method for creating loglines. https://www.practicalscreenwriting.com/loglines

"When her boyfriend decides to bring his pig hunting dog on their camping trip, a young Australian woman, who suffers from cynophobia (a fear of dogs), must overcome her fears to survive a forest creature intent on hunting them." Just my take on it! :)

Sean thanks so much for your feedback, this is such a great help!! I like your re written logline suggestion. I definitely need to work on it