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By Cameron Casino
Two Hispanic sisters find themselves victims of a
new Facial Recognition surveillance system that has falsely
deemed one of them a “Murderer.”
SYNOPSIS:
Guatemalan American cheerleader Maria Morales, wants to make
the best of her senior year and get into her dream school and
live the American dream. But things change when she's
falsely identified by facial recognition, as the murderer in
a gang shooting where she loses an old friend of hers, and is
pinned for his, and several other murders, potentially
setting Maria up for death row. Her younger sister Emily,
vows to solve the case and clear Maria’s name by finding the
real killer, and exposing the faulty facial
recognition software, which seems to be selectively used by
certain law enforcement. It's a race against time to expose
the truth... Before it's too late.
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Hey Tasha, I see you took the time to read my logline. Thank you so much for your feedback. I just wanted to ask, did you actually read the script itself or just the logline?
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After reading your synopsis, I came up with the following logline for your reference.
When Maria is wrongly sentenced to death row based on a false identification by a Facial Recognition surveillance system branding her a serial killer, her sister Emily must race against time to uncover the true killer within a week.
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Hey Sam, thank you so much for taking the time to rate this, I really appreciate it and your awesome suggestion. I just wanted to ask, I also just wanted to confirm it's visible to you guys, but I believe I also included the actual script down here. It's not long it's about 12 pages and I would love to get a review of the script itself if anyone is willing, I will say, that this script itself made it to the final rounds of being produced by a production for a series, so that being said, I believe it's worth checking out.
Hi CC, I don't see any attachment.
Hey Sam, thanks again for responding. I tried to post the script earlier for whatever reason it didn't upload so I just fixed it here! Feel free everybody to take a look!
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