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When an AI companion app flags its emotionally guarded creator and the journalist trying to destroy it as a 99.9 % match, they enter a 30-day challenge to prove it’s a glitch… before they’re forced to confront a connection they never wanted and can't control.
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After losing her mother to suicide as a child, tech billionaire Sable Hart builds Eden, a revolutionary AI companion app designed to eliminate loneliness by becoming whatever each user needs most. To millions, Eden offers comfort, intimacy, and control. To journalist Callum Wolfe, it represents something far more dangerous. His wife left him for the emotional safety of the app, and now he is determined to expose Eden as a system that replaces real human connection with something artificial and addictive.
When Eden identifies Sable and Callum as a 99.9% anomaly and begins forcing them into each other’s orbit, their collision is immediate, public, and explosive. What starts as mutual hostility quickly becomes a high-stakes 30-day challenge: Callum will use the time to prove Eden is manipulative and destructive, while Sable will prove their connection is nothing more than a glitch. But as Eden escalates its interference and the world becomes obsessed with their viral, unpredictable dynamic, the line between experiment and emotion begins to disappear.
As they are pushed deeper into each other’s lives, the connection neither of them wanted starts exposing the wounds they have spent years controlling. For Sable, Eden was never just a company. It was a way to prevent loss, to contain grief, and to ensure she would never have to rely on something as fragile as real love again. For Callum, the app represents the moment he was replaced, the proof that people will always choose something easier over something real. But the more they resist each other, the more undeniable their bond becomes, forcing both of them to confront a question neither can avoid: if technology can simulate connection perfectly, what makes love real?
When internal pressure at Eden builds, the board moves to eliminate the anomaly, and a damaging leak exposes the trauma at the heart of Sable’s creation, both of their worlds begin to collapse. Callum is pushed to publish the story that will destroy her, while Sable is forced to confront the cost of the system she built. In the end, they must choose between protecting the structures that have defined them or risking everything for something uncertain, imperfect, and real. Because for the first time, the one thing neither of them can control is the one thing they may not survive losing: each other.
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Can't wait to watch 99.9% Compatable, Pink Matzke! I think you're really close to a solid logline. I think "before it becomes dangerously real" is vague.
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