Not sure I understood this--no explanation of what the father had to do with anything.

The father was just a device to prevent it being single location and a little dull...

Great concept Anthony and I think the makings of a longer rom-com are here too (strong commercial appeal). I agree with Ardua regarding the father character, you've teased us with his involvement and I would like to know just a little more of his story; specifically what is the fatherly advice he offers (perhaps his own story involves another flawed 'L Equation'?) Well done!

cool concept. I really like it. I do agree about the father comments. I'd like to see his involvement more. He seems like a really interesting character.