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SCAR TISSUE
By Iannis Aliferis
A facially scarred woman roams the streets at night fighting crime but gets targeted by a fascist group of criminals who vow to destroy her, starting with her interracial romantic relationship.
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Can see this having clear commercial appeal. Plenty of dramatic tension potential. Hits some topical subjects too. Just hope it has some depth to it. But thumbs up on the log-line. Give me a shout if you'd like me to run the rule over the script, Iannis.
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I'd take out the comma after "crime" and prior to "but" - because you don't have a noun/pronoun prior to "gets targeted" I agree with Phil. The concept carries a lot of heat.
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LOVE IT!!!!!!
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