Severn Lang: Director, hair stylist and crew in Los Angeles, California.

INNER PEACE
GENRE: Other, Drama
LOGLINE:

What you see is not all ways what they hear their mind.

PRETTY UGLY DREAMS
GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

What would you do to keep your dreams a live?

Noel Thompson

This is a tag line not a logline. After her childhood dream of becoming a Broadway star comes true she threatens her future success when [she does this] and now must decide how far she will go to stay at the top.

It's unclear whether the dream is Broadway in your synopsis, or if she has a different dream? And what types of things would she have to do? Morally or criminally? Why?

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