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By Johnny Zito
A homeless man hears voices in his head after being enchanted by the haunting melody of a street musician
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I like this, it almost sounds like it would be great for a 22 episode Anthology TV series. You know, similar to Amazing Stories or The Twilight Zone. It's got potential I think.
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Hi Johnny! Cool beginning, we just need a bit more info about this homeless man's journey. Do the voices guide him on some sort of path? Are they improving his life or making it worse? Where does the second act take him?
Nick Assunto While I appreciate your unsolicited feedback. I am quite happy with this logline and the film was produced a long time ago and it's my only film available to the public so basically I'm done, I'm very happy with it and have moved on. Thanks
Tommy Luca Thank you very much! https://youtu.be/G7MCrVcPLxw
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Hi Johnny. One of my responsibilities here as the Script Services Coordinator is to help review loglines when they're submitted openly on the site for review. It's meant to help other writers in crafting their loglines.
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