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AT WHIT'S INN
By Alan B. Cox

GENRE: Romance, Comedy
LOGLINE: When Whitney Cox finds out a squatter is living in her house, she starts to fall in love with him.
Mike W. Rogers

This is so small but, I don't think you need the Daily. It reads a bit awkward and I'm not sure if it matters to the pitch.

Who is the Protagonist.

It seems the Homeless man is happening to the Single Woman.

If the Single Woman is the Protagonist. I think it should start A single woman's life is turned upside down by a homeless man....

Hope that help?!

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