I am an aspiring screenwriter with an optimistic attitude and a good sense of style. I have a short script uploaded that I hope reaches at least one pair of eyes. Any feedback or networking contacts would be appreciated. I am from Boston!
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Well, i am no expert but, I like what you have here. To me the concept is interesting and i like where you are going with it, but I am also somewhat concerned about the logline. This may be just me mixing up rules or expectations between genres, but I was informed that loglines had to follow a format similar to this:
When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS], a [SPECIFIC PROTAGONIST] must [OBJECTIVE], or else [STAKES].
Now, if there are exceptions to this format, I would be interested in hearing them but otherwise, I am not sure how well this will work if there is no exception to the formatting.
Cool! Welcome to freelancer Sean Fitzgerald