THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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LOCKDOWN GENERATION
By Joel McElvaney
After a humiliating video goes viral, a bullied loner seeks revenge against his longtime tormentor, forcing his best friend to decide whether to participate in the loner’s violent plan or put his life on the line to protect the bully.
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5 stars. Intriguing logline!! But the question still is "why should I root for a protagonist that frames his only friend for murder?" Are his motives strong enough that we will still like him? And shoudn't those 'motives' be represented in the logline? Maybe he is/feels "forced" to frame him. What will be the 'redemption' factor' of our protag? Hope you sell your screenplay and it's made! Best, Rutger
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I'm afraid that title and a vaguely-similar plot have already been taken by a notorious Thomas Jane film in 2020.
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Thanks for the heads up on the title, B A Mason. Happy to note my plot and theme are VERY different.
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Great idea Joel, ripe for drama and tension, I love stories like this!