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THE SUCCUBUS

THE SUCCUBUS
By Frank Hays

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

After separating from his wife, a best-selling author moves to a small town with his sons, buying a historic mansion haunted by a spirit demon.

SYNOPSIS:

In 1933, Spokane, Washington, a wealthy middle-aged man, PATSY REID, meets his young, beautiful black lover, CAROLE TAYLOR, in a speakeasy bar where she sings with a band. Carole has sex with Patsy on her break and then afterward tells him she is pregnant. This frightens Patsy because he is married to MARY REID, a sorceress. Patsy goes home to find Mary having sex with twenty-year-old high school student JOE WILLIAMS. Patsy is furious and kills Mary and Joe, dragging them to his mansion's cellar and burying them. In 2013, ANTHONY CAPRIO, early 40's, is at his writing desk when his son LUCA,18, hands Anthony an envelope they've been waiting for in the mail. It is a royalty check from his latest best-selling book. He travels to the bank to deposit the check only to see his wife, MARIA, getting kissed on the lips by the UPS driver while drinking coffee. When confronted, Maria confesses she has been sleeping with the delivery man because he has stopped loving her. They separate, and Anthony moves to a small town and buys Patsy Reid's historic mansion. His two sons, Luca and FRANCO, move with him for the summer when strange things start happening. Mary Reid haunts the house and is a spirit demon that has sex with humans. The family and their employee THOMAS, Anthony's Assistant, are now in mortal danger.

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Rutger Oosterhoff

Cool synopsis. The logline doesn't fully reflect your story, yet. But I'm sure Hollywood is never going to be the same. Maria, Maria, Maria, just met a girl called Maria... Or was it, Mary? Have to stay off the liqueur...

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