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After impregnating a young mother of two in his hometown of Minneapolis, a struggling LA-based screenwriter receives his big break and must now decide between Hollywood stardom or fatherhood.
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Strong logline, Ryan.
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Thanks so much, James Welday ! That's greatly appreciated.
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Heading in the right direction Ryan Johnston. What gets in the way? What choices? What does he learn? It's almost there, just needs a little more to tell us what the character will struggle with (beyond the getting someone pregnant)...is his job at risk, his company, his inheritance? What are the stakes? :)
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