Hey there, FV! This actually reads a bit more like a tagline as opposed to a logline. The difference being...

-A tagline is the kinda thing that you'd find at the top of a movie poster. It hints at what the film is about, but really just exists to spike intrigue. IE: "In space, no one can hear you scream."

-A logline, meanwhile, is the shortest possible summary of the entire movie (two sentences max). In your logline, it's vital to make mention of your protagonist (an adjective + noun version as opposed to a name, if you can help it), your inciting incident, the primary obstacle and what's at stake. IE: "A young F.B.I. cadet must confide in an incarcerated and manipulative killer to receive his help on catching another serial killer who skins his victims."

I hope that this is helpful!