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HELL OFF EARTH
By David Pirinelli
Two average Joe space delivery guys get dragged into an interstellar viral outbreak that turns infected miners into vicious monsters. Not only do they need to escape the infected, but also the corporation that caused them to be.
HELL OFF EARTH
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Interesting concept, David Pirinelli. I think the logline needs some work.
How about: "After two average Joe space-delivery guys get dragged into an interstellar viral outbreak, they try to escape from infected miners and the corporation that turned the miners into vicious monsters."
I think the "...get dragged into..." part needs more work though.
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