THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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BEYOND THE BLACK HORIZON
By Samuel Tracton
After her home is destroyed in a war between orcs, men, and other monsters, an embattled pirate captain must repair her rundown ship and lead her motley crew to the money they need to leave war behind for good.
BEYOND THE BLACK HORIZON
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The concept is intriguing and exciting, Samuel Tracton, but I think the second part is too long. I think readers will get winded.
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