I was taught to use scene headings with " - CONTINUOUS" for sub-locations within a scene, like this:
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INT. A HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY
A KNOCK. John comes in.
INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
John enters, looks around.
INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
Blah, blah...
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Recently, I've started seeing scene subheadings being used, like:
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INT. A HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY
A KNOCK. John comes in.
KITCHEN
John enters, looks around.
HALLWAY
Blah, blah...
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I think the subheads make a much easier read, but I'm afraid they might irritate readers when used in a spec script. Any opinions one way or the other?
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I have been told by more than one reader to use subheadings, but I have seen the other way around (your second example) in professionally produced screenplays.
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You were taught wrong and doing it wrong. You don’t want to say A HOUSE, LIVING – DAY Also if you have more than one house you might want to give each a unique name for their location.
Should be:
INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
A KNOCK. John heads into:
KITCHEN
John looks around. He heads into:
HALLWAY
Blah, blah...
Bob Johnson, I write my scene headings and subheadings like Dan Guardino.
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As a personal preference, I don't use all caps for sound effects. Many sources advise using them, but I couldn't care less. I occasionally use continuous for long action sequences but don't format it as a subheading. I agree with Dan about not having a farmhouse and living room in the same scene heading.
I do it like this.
INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
Joe grills sausages while reading his cell phone.
EXT. FARMHOUSE
Three men wearing hoods armed with machine guns quietly approach the front door.
Reference: https://www.masterclass.com/articles/continuous-screenplay#what-is-the-d...
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Hey, Bob! I used to do that too. I'm sure most of us did. It wasn't until I started talking with professionals that I was clued in and corrected it. Now, I don't use CONTINUOUS anymore.
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We all have our own take on this. I don't mind using CONTINUOUS (or CONT) within a long scene and it generally means (to me) a moving/tracking shot. When you say a KNOCK - tell me where - at the front door, the living room window, in the wall, upside his head? Does he answer the door, shoot through it - give the actor some business. I still capitalize sounds but I'm old school
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I write a lot of single location stuff, so SUB and transitions are king to me.