Screenwriting : Opinions on scene subheadings? by Bob Johnson

Bob Johnson

Opinions on scene subheadings?

I was taught to use scene headings with " - CONTINUOUS" for sub-locations within a scene, like this:

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INT. A HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY

A KNOCK. John comes in.

INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

John enters, looks around.

INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS

Blah, blah...

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Recently, I've started seeing scene subheadings being used, like:

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INT. A HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - DAY

A KNOCK. John comes in.

KITCHEN

John enters, looks around.

HALLWAY

Blah, blah...

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I think the subheads make a much easier read, but I'm afraid they might irritate readers when used in a spec script. Any opinions one way or the other?

Michael David

I have been told by more than one reader to use subheadings, but I have seen the other way around (your second example) in professionally produced screenplays.

Dan Guardino

You were taught wrong and doing it wrong. You don’t want to say A HOUSE, LIVING – DAY Also if you have more than one house you might want to give each a unique name for their location.

Should be:

INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY

A KNOCK. John heads into:

KITCHEN

John looks around. He heads into:

HALLWAY

Blah, blah...

Maurice Vaughan

Bob Johnson, I write my scene headings and subheadings like Dan Guardino.

Phillip E. Hardy, Prolifique

As a personal preference, I don't use all caps for sound effects. Many sources advise using them, but I couldn't care less. I occasionally use continuous for long action sequences but don't format it as a subheading. I agree with Dan about not having a farmhouse and living room in the same scene heading.

I do it like this.

INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

Joe grills sausages while reading his cell phone.

EXT. FARMHOUSE

Three men wearing hoods armed with machine guns quietly approach the front door.

Reference: https://www.masterclass.com/articles/continuous-screenplay#what-is-the-d...

Matthew Parvin

Hey, Bob! I used to do that too. I'm sure most of us did. It wasn't until I started talking with professionals that I was clued in and corrected it. Now, I don't use CONTINUOUS anymore.

Doug Nelson

We all have our own take on this. I don't mind using CONTINUOUS (or CONT) within a long scene and it generally means (to me) a moving/tracking shot. When you say a KNOCK - tell me where - at the front door, the living room window, in the wall, upside his head? Does he answer the door, shoot through it - give the actor some business. I still capitalize sounds but I'm old school

Craig D Griffiths

I write a lot of single location stuff, so SUB and transitions are king to me.

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