DISCLAIMER: I'm a rookie screenwriter providing guidance to the less experienced. That's all. Simply sharing my experience, my playbook, on how I write features.... Okay, here we go, ladies and gentlemen! After a weekend binge with a One Page, here's what we came up with... Let's start with the revised One page. Notice we upgraded components. The entourage is no longer just Campers. They're a gun crazy entourage - the entourage from hell. This sets up a much more exciting story. Posting beat sheets next...
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That sounds WHACKED, Shawn (and a mean that in a good way, of course.) Visualizing that in my head and running it through my Film Brain Database.....nope.....never seen that before. Good job, Shawn....and best of luck on the Mad Mountain!
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I see Shawn replacing Robert McKee in year 2021. His stuff is presentable. Easy to read for Executives. I think the term is "broad strokes?" Fill in details later when they pay$$ you to write.
Damn, Dan... thank you brother. That means a lot. I'm honored to even be mentioned in a sentence with a cat like that. My man... Alway here for you, bro
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Sounds like fun!