Screenwriting : 100 Scene-Writing Prompts by Maurice Vaughan

J.D. Brown

Thanks for sharing. Those look like some fun exercises.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, J.D. Brown.

Colette "ByFilms" Byfield

Great post Maurice Vaughan ! As I was taught, “Scenes are like parties. Enter late and leave early.”

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Colette "ByFilms" Byfield. How is your Thriller project coming?

Colette "ByFilms" Byfield

Maurice Vaughan thank you for asking! I took the advice I was given by the executive and “fixed” a series of flashbacks to keep the reader/audience in the present. I think it really adds to the suspense because now you won’t know “why” the main character was killed until the chilling end! :)

Maurice Vaughan

Colette "ByFilms" Byfield, from your comment, I can see the script being better because of the change. It keeps the reader and audience in the present, it draws out a mystery over the entire script, and the chilling ending has an added layer (finding out why). I could just be rephrasing what you said. Haha What is your plan for the script? I'm not sure if I asked that before.

Colette "ByFilms" Byfield

Maurice Vaughan right? Those flashbacks make it much easier to explain “whodunnit” but it was also making the story a little more sluggish.

Maurice Vaughan

I think you went with the right choice changing that part in the script. Is the script finished now, or do you have to do more rewrites?

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