Screenwriting : Write in Dialogue What the Other Man is Thinking by Mark Films

OTHER MAN (V.O.)

"Baby shark, doo doo doo doo doo doo."

Seriously:

OTHER MAN (V.O.)

"I wasn't ready to propose. No. Way. But I felt like I had to since this guy did. I didn't even have a ring. And look what I was wearing. But I did what I always do. Wing it."

Mark Films This is a great exercise. Thanks for this idea. Maurice Vaughan is so great at this, while I have a lot to learn. But I was steering more towards "It's done. You're free." lol.

Thanks, Debbie Elicksen. What is he free from?

LOL the guy in the background looks like he's suddenly realizing he has to propose too!

AMAZING Maurice Vaughan

What is your opening scene Debbie Elicksen

Or no Sydney S because he looks really mad to me. Lol.

Thanks, Mark Films.

WOMAN: Oh! I mouth-barfed .

Slightly deaf, Hervé Villechaize (Tattoo from "Fantasy Island") proposes.

TATTOO: Be my wife.

TATTOO: The plane? The plane?

"Oh man, did you have to do that here?"

THE OTHER MAN (V.O.) (sighs) Thanks a lot show off. All I wanted were some wings. Now I’m gonna have to have the “where is this going” talk with Chrissy later. Douche!

Love it E Langley

Well done Ingrid Wren and you described the look on the man´s face perfectly.

Lol Paula Murrain YOU NAILED IT!!

POTENTIAL FIANCEE: I never thought I'd fall in love with a villain, but what about ... Bond, James Bond?

Y E S!!! E Langley it just keeps getting gooder and gooder!

“That’s the third one today…”

Hurleyman quietly decides which weapons to use on Filbert to stop him from stealing Edwina, his one true love. Would it be the Incontinence Ray, Chant of Instant Stage IV Cancer or the dreaded Flashlight of Truly, Really, Very Painful Death?

He isn't proposing. He dropped his knife and she assumes he's proposing... now the guy in the blue thinks he needs to do a romantic gesture because his date looks wrapped up in the moment... now that would be rom-com shenanigans....

That’s the waiter bowing down to get the knife, the lady is acting all “schmoozy” to create a distraction while her other accomplices rob the hotel restaurant ala “Pulp Fiction”;

Darren Stephens that got dark and way to elevate the scene! Well done!

"Dude, are you really gonna propose with spinach in your teeth?"

George (V.O.)

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It's time to break free, be my own man! What’s this? A proposal? You're shitting me, right NOW? No, no, bad timing dude, and... oh great, she’s turning around, squealing like she’s just won the lottery! Guess the breakup speech can wait. Should I smile, clap or just sip my coffee?

Tick-tock. Smile, cry, say yes. You’ll be dust in minutes. And Ariana Grande? She’ll never sing another note...

Dude says she can't have dessert. Mom only lets him date skinny chicks.

I may have no legs, but I have caught up with you at last!

“Ma’am, I’m going to tell you one last time, you’re stepping on the fire extinguisher”

“I just went through a “Final Destination” premonition, can you just wait there, as “Death” is coming for us all, you’ll see I am telling the truth and there’ll be cracks everywhere. I’ve gotta use the fire extinguisher as a “final warning” for everyone to get out.”

Well done!! Love them all!!

Man, I wish I found someone worth marrying

Nice one Vic Luna

POORLY DRESSED MAN

(mutters)

After dinner I'm gonna get the 'what are you waiting for' speech.

Man in blue:

(V.O.)

"Wow, now it's really going to awkward when I tell her I've been seeing her sister."

What a stupid man propose her in front of my gf . Now my gf will expect this from me .and After proposal , why they react like They have won the paradise .

BLUE SHIRT GUY (V.O.)

"Fuck. Now she's going to bring up getting marriage again."

Amazing Jon Shallit and Danny Range and Jim Boston and Anthony Moore

HURLEY

That’s the chick that hooked up with James last night… I feel a tick coming on… sh…., it. here it comes..,

Nice one!! John Montague