Hi all. As said in the title, I'm pursuing producing a Nightwing (DC Comics) fan-film. I've finished my first draft of the script and could really use some critique on the wider themes and general plot of the movie...and my dialogue, which definitely needs work.
Any takers? I'm new here. Let me know if this isn't kosher.
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I'm a big comic book geek and I'd be interested in reading it :-)
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Congratulations on finishing the first draft, William Sutton! You could post your script on your profile. That way, members can download the script and give feedback on it. Click the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and select “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu. Scroll down to “Loglines” and click “Add/edit loglines” to the right of “Loglines.” You can also post your script on your profile this way: www.stage32.com/loglines (near the top where it says “Add a Logline”)
I suggest using a photo of yourself as your profile picture. People will feel more comfortable networking and collaborating with you if they know what you look like. You can upload a picture by clicking the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and selecting “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu, then clicking the red button underneath your location and choosing "Update profile picture."
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Good advice from @mauricevaughan
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan! I've done those things now.
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Hi William, I love nightwing, would love to see it when your done
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Welcome to Stage 32, William Sutton!
Congrats on finishing your first draft. that’s a huge milestone. A Nightwing fan-film sounds like a fun and ambitious project. I’m always interested in character-driven stories, especially within established universes. Happy to connect and exchange feedback where I can. Best of luck polishing the script!
Thanks, Jack Binder.
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You're welcome, William Sutton. Great. I'm a Nightwing fan. I'm looking forward to watching your fan-film!
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Have obtained the rights? I’d love to read it. Big fan of DC Comics.
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im pretty sure you are not legally able to make a fan fiction film about a character when you dont own the rights. you can write a script for fun, but you cant profit off of their character.
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Hey William,
Congrats on finishing your first draft — that’s no small thing.
I’d be interested in reading it and sharing thoughts on the overall arc, themes, and dialogue. I work primarily as an editor, and I made a small fan film years ago, so I understand the unique challenges of working within existing IP while trying to make something feel fresh.
Happy to connect and take a look if you’re still looking for readers.
– Kevin
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Danny Manus you’d be correct! This vanity project is entirely nonprofit!