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QUARTER-FINALIST - 2025 Emerging Screenwriters Competition (Horror Feature) QUARTER-FINALIST - 2025 Emerging Screenwriters Competition (Thriller Feature) Winner - Bronze Anvil 2026
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After unintentionally hitting the little stars on my own logline, I have given myself a 5 star review that I cannot delete or edit. And so now I look like a tool, haha.
Sounds interesting.
And LOL at the 5 star 'tool' review ha ha.
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2 people like this
Kathryn Zizek Kathryn, this is a haunting and emotionally rich premise with a strong psychological hook. The idea of a past deal resurfacing at such a vulnerable moment motherhood creates immediate tension and depth.
The shapeshifting entity adds a compelling layer of paranoia and suspense, especially if its deception blurs the line between reality and perception. There’s great potential here to explore guilt, consequence, and identity in a very intimate yet terrifying way.
It sounds like a story that can balance psychological horror with emotional stakes, which is always powerful. Really intriguing concept with strong festival appeal.
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