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After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.
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I like this. I'd pay $15 to see it!
Coming from a Cop working in a major City - we just don’t pressure people to turn into informants. It’s not worth the trouble because they often become unreliable. Why didn’t she just confide in the Cops about her sister being held captive? Why didn’t he just have her killed her before the “run” since she wasn’t coming back anyway? Most often, once a drug dealer knows that they’re runner is working for or is talking with the Cops, they are rubbed out almost immediately.
I do like the plot though ... you have an interesting story.