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GIFTED
By Tess Meyer
A nightmare-plagued teen is recruited by a mysterious institute where the dark secret of her supernatural legacy awaits; she's the bad guy.
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Consider: "A mysterious institute recruits a nightmare-plagued teen she will learn the dark secret of her supernatural legacy; she's the bad guy."
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Great start, but I'm not sure about "she's the bad guy", just out right. Maybe something like, only to realize she's the true villain... :)