First Email :
>From: "Yvonne Vera"
>Reply-To: "Yvonne Vera"
>To: "Elnaser Abdelwahab"
>Subject: A writing life
>Date: Sun, 14 Apr 2002 09:16:23 +0200
>
>Your story is really great and I have read it MANY times and it grows more charming each time.
>
> I would change the first paragraph a bit, perhaps, so that the reader is not feeling there is such a focus on the woman's physical features --- it grows into such a political and strong cultural commentary and it is also has another internal world of the main character which I found equally fascinating and which gave the story a psychological intensity. I also liked the way you expressed and developed the narrative -- with some semi-informal tone--but very realistic... I hope to always hear from you and if not to read your poems due to language problems but at least to hear that you are writing....regards from Yvonne
My Reply
----- Original Message -----
From: Elnaser Abdelwahab
To: yvera@telconet.co.zw
Sent: Monday, April 29, 2002 4:23 PM
Subject: Re: A writing life
Dear Mrs. Vera,
thank you again for the encouraging words. I also hope very much to be able to start a real writing activity ... I wished I could let you read my different writings. Concerning the old man and his bus .... I originally wanted to send the story for example to BBC broadcast competitions (not for the sake of publishing itself, because I never intended to make money out of my work), but for the sake of showing another important way of civilization-clash, which does not include bombs and guns.
So what you think about this idea ? Is the story able to get a chance in such formus (is it in your oppinion worth getting published ?) ... and how would I proceed (I don't have addresses or Emails of such formus) ?
By the way : I am interested to attend your readings in germany. Please tell me if you come once more. Unfortunately I did not buy your book "Butterfly burning" until now so that I might be able to read and comment it.
Greetings
NASER