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This will chronicle the experiences of the owners and renters of a luxury condominium community where I lived for ten years on the tenth floor. My Developing Your First Novel Webinar on my profile page is based on this location shoot. It covers the process of developing your first novel that’s based on a true story adapted to fiction. Residents will be interviewed and questions will be asked. The surrounding areas will be included in the research. Some of our findings Unknowns Origin of the main phone number (Dead Man two years back) Actual location of the building Transactional mysteries Potential Insurance Mysteries Plot in development stage Unknowns could lead to (pros and cons) The Unknowns are what makes movies blockbuster hits. Unit in the building lines up with October 03, 2025 (10/03/2025) Which might make it a historical fact in a historical building on a historical day. Current occupant has no previous addresses, email or phone numbers. Visited the building, bank that covered the renovation in my home equity (No Tellers at the branch) Saw one of my neighbors who taught art classes to my nephew and niece who visited. Bought several of her paintings and miniatures for gifts. Her gallery in her unit was used as part of a birthday gift. Uncovered some additional information 3 Act Mini Movie Method Fiction or Non Fiction hasn’t been decided. Working on which genre. Script Legal Research Phase Open to collaborations and partnerships https://www.counseling.org/mental-health-counseling/world-mental-health-day Copyright@2024-2027 In production with The Graduate Student which has been in production over the last 15 years. All rights reserved and protected by The ICC Group Legal Division (handles legal contracts and legal counsel) https://www.phenom.com/blog/diversity-and-inclusion-guide
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It's an intriguing log-line dear Tasha--- but slightly confusing because you open with a view from 'An On-Looker Outside-looking-in" and suddenly we're consider something about thee Owners perspectives instead. You might do well to create a different avenue for bringing all of them into play. :--)
Blessings from Sir Nicholas In Seattle
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It's unique! I just recommend omitting the word "it's" and probably replacing with "mystery and".
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'Mysteries and secrets' could use hints/details to draw more interest.
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