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GRANDMA'S MAP
By Carolyna Lovely
A young boy traces the lines on his grandmothers face as she tells him the stories related to each ‘road’ on the map of her journey to old.
SYNOPSIS:
The day is done. 5 year old Koda is bathed and ready for bed. His grandmother tucks him in and regales him of the stories attached to some of the deep wrinkles on her face. The short stories bring about laughter and emote a deep, gentle love that exist between a grandmother and their grandchild.
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what's the conflict? What is the journey the boy is going through - logline way to general - it reads as a boy goes on a journey
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Kacee: There is ZERO conflict in its 8 minutes. It is a simple story - like centuries of stories Grandmothers have shared - of the gentle, endearing bond between a grandmother and her grandson, at the age where WHY is his most asked question, and in this case the innocence of asking about her wrinkles in the way an inquisitive 4 yr might. Thanks for the 2.
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Truly imaginative. Can't wait to see this. Wish it was a feature. Not every story needs conflict!!! Tired of conflict!!! Maybe that's why movies are becoming so repetitive... Hello remakes??? Maybe the film making story blueprint needs a sprucing??? Taboo I know! Best wishes <3