Naomi Williams: Screenwriter and actor in Hartford, Connecticut.

Todd Crowell
Help with wants and needs

Howdy everyone!

I've got a dystopian story about slaves and am having trouble figuring out their wants. I know, I know. What else would they want? FREEDOM! But here's the deal - outside the area they live is a deadly wasteland. Freedom, as far as they know, means death. So, I need some ideas on what...

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Michael Mizov

Another aspect I don't think has been explored in the other comments is what it would mean if they were in charge. If outside their enclave is death have the current leaders had to make hard decisions...

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Christiane Lange

A new slave arrives and has a story about a livable place beyond the wasteland.

Todd Crowell

James, That is absolute best answer I've heard yet. I like the way you think, my man.

Doug Nelson
Need a little help from a woman writer

I'm writing a character driven, fate structured short. The male hero & female antihero meet in the opening scene. She is attracted to him. How would she show her interest in him by action?

The story morphs into a 'Cinderella' like structure in Act II in which she becomes the hero by her actions. He...

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Doug Nelson

The storyline has the two characters switching roles - she's becoming the A character (hero) but needs him to move forward; I've got them touching and eye locked. Now she just needs to lead him into t...

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Karen "Kay" Ross

So much more information is needed. What exactly is she interested in? As an anti-hero, would she be all about the physical encounter and not interested in sentiment? How do they know each other - wor...

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Chelsea Regenold

I'd recommend reading/watching Fleabag. She's an anti-hero who shows attraction towards several men throughout the series. Although she breaks the fourth wall and shares her inner thoughts with the audience, she also uses a lot of body language and expression. Plus, it's just a great show!

Richard "RB" Botto

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Amanda Toney

Hello Naomi -

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