I want to hear what you guys think of my first short film I've made. A budget of $300, and shot in one day. I really want to know what you guys think. Please do not hold back
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Well you already know it's a fantastic first film. A little slow in some parts, but the setup and story are unexpected. Also I will say that as a short it is very properly ambiguous about what happens next, which in a longer format you would have to answer.
Thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated
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Your first film is very nicely done. It has a nice easy pace to it and the storyline is pretty well structured; the ambiguous ending leads me to ask what's next. It's a good lead in to a future chapter. The wild soundscape tends to quash the dialog a bit. But overall, it's a piece to be justly proud of. I would be honored to exhibit it on my Indie Filmmaker's Showcase cable network program if you'd like.
Oh thank you so much. that would be an honour to be featured thank you Doug Nelson
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Hey, Huzaifah Abu Bakar! Thanks for posting this in the correct lounge for feedback! If you want more people to chime in, I would suggest giving feedback on some other's work (who have asked for it), and leave them a link to this post requesting they return the favor.