Speak Now http://youtu.be/5qCv5_hyslM
Your Stage : My first shot at writing and producing by Lauren Watson
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Especially gripping for married people young and old.
Hi Lauren. I really enjoyed your short, especially the performances. What did you shoot on?
awesome. great look. ive been actually working on all of my scripts as well. trying to shoot my first film some time next year. i would love to see more of your stuff.
Good piece.
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I had a peek again at Speak. Excellent production values, really true actors. If you're ready for some darkly comic material, let me know.
Thank you everyone!! Feel free to inbox me on here for other projects. I'm up for (almost!) anything! :)
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I liked it a lot. Story was good and well acted. Good job Lauren!
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Great story, well shot and edited. Lovely twist and generously timed acting. Good job!
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Hello Lauren, Your short was straight, to the point and well told. I would open with the camera tilting down, rather than on the static shot of the church at the top before tilting down. Also, curious as to why you went from the wide shots to closeups versus med to CU.... Nonetheless, you are definitely off to a great start! You should be proud of what you've completed!
Nice job Lauren! The storyline is good.
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Lauren, you did such a great job! Loved the story and the pacing. Congrats.
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I thought it was so great Lauren! I loved the ending!
Thank you so much!
Not bad......Good job.
Spruce work!
very interesting...love it
So this was a dream sequence? Good first film. Did you direct it too? I would have had a closer shot on the two guys exiting the church first before using the master shot. Just sayin. Awesome job though. Good luck with your next one!
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I'd like to say simply "GOOD FILM"...regardless of what # it is:) I've seen work from seasoned, professionals with a multitude of films under their belt and their stuff couldn't compare to yours. Also, a hundred people would readily tell you a hundred 'different' things 'they' would have done differently; and that's cool! Learn, grow, get better, as we ALL should. But always DO YOU! I enjoyed what I saw...again, good film:)
Great film!
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Well done!!
nice
WOW! Nice twist... indeed. Beautifully filmed... way to go girl.... You are Great!!!
Really great work! Congrats!
Great work, and well done
welcome, Kyle
Well done. Nicely, subtly done. Simple, effective camera work and great acting. Bravo!
yes! Well done and friends of mine in the credits too! Really enjoyed it. :-)
Well done. Really nice work on all fronts. Thanks for posting and keep up the good work!