I was just reading this and found it interesting: http://www.scriptmag.com/features/columns/story-development/articulating...
Here's a couple of screenshots from the article.
From what I read and learnt so far, I've been under the impression that less is better, like if you can articulate something with less words it'd be easier to read.
Doesn't seem so in this article no?
I am probably missing something here as I see these two shots. What do you all think?