Hi Christine, solid idea! Giving me last season of THE SINNER vibes with this one. As it sounds like the ex-military wife is the protagonist here, I'd suggest placing her front-and-centre of your logline to make it clear she's the protagonist, and really sell the stakes of her conflict here.

For example: 'In a quaint New England fishing town, a highly-decorated ex-military soldier seeks answers and justice after discovering her cop husband's murder is linked to a dangerous underground drug ring.'

Thanks Nate, using that! Sound much better!

No problem Christine, you can have it for free! :D

haha Thank you! I hate doing log lines. My weakness for sure! So should I add "that involves local fishermen" at the end or just leave that for the synopsis?

If you don't mind answering that : )

No problem! You could include that part if you wanted to, although it may be best to restructure the logline just to give it a bit of oomph :)

I really like the logline, Christine Capone. I would remove "military" because we know from "soldier" that she was in the military.

Maurice, good point! thank you!

Nice work on the logline also, Nate Rymer.

You're welcome, Christine Capone.

Great Job how about his More compact version at 30 words

In a quaint fishing town, a highly-decorated soldier seeks justice after discovering the murder of her husband is linked to a dangerous underground drug ring that involves local fishermen.

You all are so good at loglines. Thanks Amazing Kacee!

thank you for the compliment, You are most welcome!

Very intriguing premise! I sense it will do well!

Thanks Tom. It needs work apparently : )