Hi Wayne thanks for the White knights on the log Line / have a look at Centains / it's about the Yeti but in a different way / The Pillowcase Man will go on KICK START / Soon stay safe Steve

Thanks for the positive comment Steve.

Hi, Wayne Cothron. I reworked the logline a little: "______ goes to The Himalayas to solve this father's murder and expose a worldwide conspiracy involving the legendary Yeti."

Instead of Wayne Thomas," I would put an adjective and the main character's title (doctor, detective, etc.).

Also, your logline is in the synopsis section.

Great start! While I don't know that it is essential to include the name "Wayne Thomas" I agree that an adjective might help contextualize Wayne's personalist (ie "a rogue archeologist", "a brave but humble Scotsman", "a mild mannered accountant") - which help us get a sense of who he is.

To build off of Maurice's logline:

When his father dies under mysterious circumstances, a (cautious, superstitious, bemused?) travel journalist embarks on a dangerous trek to the Himalayas, but soon uncovers more than he bargained for. The legendary Yeti.

Also, like Maurice said, you need to switch the synopsis with the logline. And vice versa.

Strong conflict. Original premise. Hint of mystery. Very good.