I have a question along these same lines. When I was writing my script for a screenwriting class, there is a marketing component. My question is, 1.5 years and several re-writes later, should I re-query the producers who appeared interested when I was taking the class. Thanks for any suggestions.
Hi Dan, I think she misused the word synopsis. In a sales letter I think it would be better to use the word “summary”. It is true that a screenplay summary is a synopsis. However a synopsis does have a certain form and five lines is not that form. That is virtually a logline.
When you get a distribution deal for a film, you tend to have to supply a bunch of synopses of various lengths (30 words, 250 characters, and 500 characters) so platforms have description text that fits their needs.
Synopsis is a very flexible term and it's being used correctly here.
I'm very sceptical of the five line rule claim when it comes from someone with no bio and/or credits. That said, the principal is certainly true; you want to draw people in, not bombard them.
Thanks for explaining, CJ Walley. "When you get a distribution deal for a film, you tend to have to supply a bunch of synopses of various lengths (30 words, 250 characters, and 500 characters) so platforms have description text that fits their needs." I remember DVDs used to have (might still have) short synopsis on the back cover. I also thought about the TV guide menu when you said that.
"It is also good to get to your point quickly so you don't waste the reader's time." I focus on that when I write a query letter, Ewan. I scan the letter, making sure it's straight to the point.
She might be talking about a short synopsis, Dan Guardino. Sometimes I write a short synopsis and a full synopsis for a script.
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I have a question along these same lines. When I was writing my script for a screenwriting class, there is a marketing component. My question is, 1.5 years and several re-writes later, should I re-query the producers who appeared interested when I was taking the class. Thanks for any suggestions.
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Great read and congrats!
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Hi Dan, I think she misused the word synopsis. In a sales letter I think it would be better to use the word “summary”. It is true that a screenplay summary is a synopsis. However a synopsis does have a certain form and five lines is not that form. That is virtually a logline.
Otherwise this is just some solid sales advice.
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I agree, Dan Guardino. Sending emails is a longshot compared to calling agents. I think it's smart to do both (email and call) though.
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Monica Arisman, I think it's ok to re-query the producers. It's been a long time, and you've done rewrites.
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I think summary would've been a better word, Craig D Griffiths.
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When you get a distribution deal for a film, you tend to have to supply a bunch of synopses of various lengths (30 words, 250 characters, and 500 characters) so platforms have description text that fits their needs.
Synopsis is a very flexible term and it's being used correctly here.
I'm very sceptical of the five line rule claim when it comes from someone with no bio and/or credits. That said, the principal is certainly true; you want to draw people in, not bombard them.
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Thanks for explaining, CJ Walley. "When you get a distribution deal for a film, you tend to have to supply a bunch of synopses of various lengths (30 words, 250 characters, and 500 characters) so platforms have description text that fits their needs." I remember DVDs used to have (might still have) short synopsis on the back cover. I also thought about the TV guide menu when you said that.
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The old TV guide menus are literally where the term logline comes from.
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I don't know if I knew that, CJ Walley. Thanks.
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Some great advice in this article! It is also good to get to your point quickly so you don't waste the reader's time.
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"It is also good to get to your point quickly so you don't waste the reader's time." I focus on that when I write a query letter, Ewan. I scan the letter, making sure it's straight to the point.