Matthew H Emma's Lounge Discussions

Craig D Griffiths
Share your thoughts please

Character dialogue and action are like three sides of a triangle all supporting and informing each other. Which one do you favour or think is more important? Do you start with a character and listen for dialogue or do you write dialogue and let that inform of the character? Thanks

Beth Fox Heisinger

Regarding this thread topic... Character, dialogue and action are all parts of a whole. The whole being greater than the sum of its parts. So I don't see any one of those elements as being more import...

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Allen Johnson

I don't think one is more important than the other. However, I typically let the character color the dialogue.

Craig D Griffiths

Dan M, like most people it is hard to see my own mistakes. I had a character that started as a greasy, unwashed junky, but how he acted during the story was inconsistent with who he was. So I swap peo...

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Craig D Griffiths

When I was talking about action I was talking from a character context not a story context. Does the person hug or shake hands, do they cry or shake when angry. I heard about an argument in a writer's...

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Craig D Griffiths

Robert, yep default, dialogue has to be good. But does a person say "can't" or "cannot", both speak to character. If the "cannot" is perfect would you go back and change the character to make this fit...

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Arial Burnz
Beginner Question: What to Write?

Hi! I'm new to screenwriting and the site, but as my profile says, I'm no stranger to scripts. My question is more about sale-ability than techniques or mechanics.

I am a huge fan of fantasy and paranormal. I'm a romance novelist and I write paranormal romance Arial ducks, but I know many producers a...

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Doug Nelson

I read it last night and love the story line. I'll get you some notes in a day or so.

Arial Burnz

Thank you, Doug!!!!

Arial Burnz

Welcome back to Stage32, Jorge! And thank you so much for the encouragement!

Chris Thomas

Write what you know or what you're passionate about.

Doug Nelson

Arial - I just sent you some brief notes, let me know if you got then and if they are helpful, thanx, Doug

Matthew H Emma
Male or Female Protags

Who do you all think are more fun protagonists to write? Male or female protags. I have written both, but for whatever reason, I have more female protagonists and think they are more fun to write.

Matthew H Emma

DL you raise a great point and thanks for the insight. I would say my lady protags are dynamic and most certainly flawed.

Bill Costantini

To answer your original question....it's all fun!

Matthew H Emma

Like your philosophy Bill.

Tayo Akinsipe

I don't think the gender matters. I believe the personality matters more. At the same time i think giving a female character a personality or type or role that is normally male is very interesting and vice versa

Bill Albert

Like you I most often have female protagonists. It just come down to being more of a challenge. When I was in college they kept saying to just write a male character and then change the name to a female. I never, ever, ever, once did that.

Matthew H Emma
Hello

Hello my fellow screenwriters. I'm Matthew H Emma and I have written five feature-length scripts I one day dream will get sold and be turned into films. I look forward to interacting with and learning from as many of you as possible.

Myron DeBose

Historical sounds cool.

Matthew H Emma

Thanks.

Ceejay Young

Welcome Matthew, good luck!

Natalie Farst

They all sound very interesting. I think the sports drama may have some serious fans out there!!

Matthew H Emma

Thank you. What do you write about?

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