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DEFENDER

DEFENDER
By Nadir Akhmerov

GENRE: Action, Comedy
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A timid taxi driver, who dreamed of being a police officer, becomes the defender of a world-famous, selfish female singer who's being chased by a gang of thugs.

Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

The concept is cool. I think the logline can be smoother. How about: "A timid taxi driver, who dreamed of being a police officer, becomes the defender of a world-famous, selfish female singer who's being chased by a gang of thugs."

Nadir Akhmerov

Thank you, Maurice!

Nadir Akhmerov

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Daniel Stuelpnagel

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Daniel Stuelpnagel

Nadir Akhmerov now I would like to know the arena of story, whether is a general location or settings, thinking of Miami or points south, tell me the adventures that will be unfolding here!? perhaps on Neptune and it's sci-fi with passionate arts and culture sex romp ??

Nadir Akhmerov

Daniel. The action takes place in Las Vegas and beyond. No fiction at all.

Daniel Stuelpnagel

Nadir Akhmerov did you enjoy Ultraviolet (2006) dir. Kurt Wimmer with Milla Jovovich

I am seeing the tone here or is it different?

Would that be a comparable or are you going in a different direction?

I want to know.

What about LUCY (Luc Besson) ?? to me it's a fascinating case study ...

Daniel Stuelpnagel

Nadir Akhmerov wait, no fiction? but you are telling me it's a doc?

Nadir Akhmerov

I will publish a synopsis. Read this.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Nadir Akhmerov.

Nadir Akhmerov

Ultraviolet and Lucy are fantastic films. And my script is a comedy thriller. This story is, so to speak, about two partners who differ from each other in character. One of them is a rich, popular female singer, the other is an ordinary hard worker.

Nadir Akhmerov

Thanks, Tasha!

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B A Mason

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B A Mason

The Taxi driver dreamed or dreams of becoming an officer? Also, too many adjectives to describe the singer.

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