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After being secretly sent to Earth as an infant to survive a galactic coup, an orphaned but brilliant young alien cow is torn from the only home he’s ever known and forced back to his home planet—where an interstellar war demands he save a world he’s never known.
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Logline: After being secretly sent to Earth as an infant to survive a galactic coup, an orphaned but brilliant young alien cow is torn from the only home he’s ever known and forced back to his home planet—where an interstellar war demands he save a world he’s never known.
Comparables: Guardians of the Galaxy meets Zootopia with a sprinkle of Home
Rating/Target Audience: PG / 4-Quadrant
Format: Animated Feature
Personal connection: Inspired by a recent visit from my nephew with autism. This is a story to inspire us all to see the value in those with special needs.
Synopsis:Waffles, a brilliant young calf with Asperger’s, has been living in hiding on Earth to escape the evil Shadow Herd — despotic yaks and cows bent on interstellar domination. Safely placed with kindly farmers who lovingly care for their cows, he enjoys a quiet life — until Sir Loin Moostache abducts him and a malfunction launches him across the galaxy. Waffles crash-lands on Bovinia, a planet threatened by the same enemy.
Rescued by Lil Mac and her team of rebel calves, Waffles’ mechanical genius is seen as the key to stopping Carve-L and the Shadow Herd’s plan to brainwash Bovinia’s population. Under their guidance, he trains in espionage and begins to understand the growing threat. Meanwhile, the Agents of C.O.W. help Sir Loin realize he’s been manipulated, prompting him to turn against his captors and aid Waffles in the fight.
As Carve-L accelerates his plan, Waffles and the team infiltrate labs, evade traps, and uncover the machinery designed to enslave the planet. With the rebels captured and time running out, Waffles must rely on the one thing he’s always doubted — his unique way of thinking — to sabotage the Shadow Herd’s machines, free the captives, and end Carve-L’s takeover.
In defeating the Shadow Herd, Waffles discovers that what makes him different is exactly what makes him a hero.
Feature script available upon request.To download the feature pitch deck, click here.
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Jim Boston Maurice Vaughan Nate Rymer Thanks so much for the great ratings!
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You're welcome Leonardo, this is a brilliantly unique premise for an animated TV series! :)
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That's very kind of you, Nate Rymer . Thank you so very much for taking the time.
Nelson Christian Amador Hey Nelson - thank you so very much for the high rating!
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Your welcome Leonardo anytime man.
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Thank you Debbie Elicksen for the high rating. So kind!
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Thank you Michele Traina !!
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As someone on the spectrum, I am intrigued! But may I suggest that “Asperger’s Syndrome” is no longer an appropriate description? (Lots of info online as to why.) Also, most autistics would like your logline better if it read “When a young autistic cow…” In other words, the cow is autistic, not the cow “has” autism.
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Mark Miller Thanks so much for the kind rating!
Cheryl Boyles Hey Cheryl! Thanks so much for the info. Looks like it's time for some research! AND thanks for the high rating!
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Nathaniel Baker Thank you so much!
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Ashley Renee Smith Thank you so much for the kind rating, Ashley!!
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Thank you so much Rich Wingerter . Much obliged!
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Thanks Matthew Gross for the awesome rating!!
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As someone who was probably diagnosed as autistic when I was a kid, I can see why this would work for this specific demographic. Mission Impossible-meets-Zootopia, not a bad concept.
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Thanks so much @Marcel!!
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Rutger Oosterhoff 2 Thank you so much Rutger. Very kind!
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Sarah Kennedy You are so kind, Sarah! Thank you!!
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Love the pitch deck as well, absolutely excellent. Can't wait to eventually see this!
Thanks a ton David Foy Bauer . Really good to meet you yesterday!
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Thank you @Irene!
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I think this is cleaver!!
Thanks Mark Gosney!
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This one made me laugh Leonardo Ramirez 2 because it reminds me of an animation Idea I had called CowPatty about a cow name Patty. I love this!!!
Haha! “CowPatty”! Love it! Thanks so much for the ratings @Mark Deuce!
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Thanks a ton Margret!!!
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Thanks very much @Dwayne Williams!! Means a lot!
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The concept and the premise is intriguing. Even though I have asperger's syndrome, I do appreciate how an anthropomorphic young cow is searching for sanctuary to avoid being abducted by a corrupt galactic corporation. I like the idea of Guardians of the Galaxy meets Zootopia kind of art description. Keep up the good work, Leonardo Ramirez 2.
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Thank you so much Chase. That really means a lot.
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Gracias @Juliana!!!!!!
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Thank you @Richard!!