Thanks, Vivek and Nathaniel

A Fascinating premise and a really good story!!!

Thanks William!

Thanks Ben!

Perfection!

Thanks... Arthur and Juno!

Thanks Mr. Lance!

Thanks Chantel!

Great concept and strong storyline.

Thanks Erick, you are very kind to say so

It sounds to me like a futuristic version of classical movies/books like "The Invention of Morel" or "Forbidden Planet". Great concept!

Thanks Carlos

Reading the logline and synopsis made me want more, I was disappointed there was no screenplay to read - personally, Wilmer, I wasn't convinced with your logline ending, "to assess his mental health" - too tame - I would prefer you suggest some sexual tension as in the female-looking robot was sent to "persuade him to return". Cheers.

I think the word order of the logline could be re-jigged for an easier read. It felt like information was leapfrogging itself. My attempt for you:

Following the death of his wife, a robotics tycoon isolates himself on an island to grieve. His concerned corporation send a female android to retrieve him but instead they fall in love putting the company in jeopardy

It's a cool premise, I must say though, it has eerily similar vibes to Ex-Machina. If you haven't seen it, check it out and maybe think about what sets your story apart from it?

Thanks Channel for your notes. They are always well received.

Thanks Adam, I like logline better as you put it.

What's the jeopardy?

just reading the synopsis, I can see the act structure so clearly- I thought of Ex Machina too. Intrigued by these 'tactical android'- have a Terminator Salvation type scene in my head, but I'm sure it's much more subtle than that.

I liked it, also. It sort of reminds me of a twilight zone episode where a prisoner is shipped to a deserted planet as punishment, however, they send him a female robot to keep him company. It’s called, THE LONELY.” Not your story, but good 1/2 hour of your time worth watching? :-)