Screenwriting

From structure to content to representation to industry trends, this is the place to discuss, share content and offer tips and advice on the craft and business of screenwriting

Maria Restivo Glassner
Thoughts on the latest season of Fallout?

I absolutely loved the first season, but when the last episode beautifully completed Lucy's arc, I felt like they really would need to dig deep to keep up the momentum with her in the next season. When they began season 2, showing her almost going backwards into being more naive again, I felt like t...

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Maria Restivo Glassner

@alex bridge Agreed! I feel like they are finally reaching back around with Lucy to do the arc they should have started with. I also feel like it should have been more her active choice to change and not just blamed on the drugs but that's just me.

Curt Samlaska

I agree with you Maria...this season seems to be rudderless...although I am enjoying the flashback scenes that seem to be moving towards some revelations. The filler seems more like an excuse to showc...

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Maria Restivo Glassner

Curt Samlaska Well said. I agree, the flashback scenes are brilliant. I especially enjoyed Whiteknife's speech to Cooper, which further entrenched his character in our hearts and was brilliant. The fi...

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E Langley

Totally get this take. The end of season one felt so earned that real forward motion for Lucy seemed like the obvious next step. Walking her back makes things feel a bit looser, especially given how s...

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Maria Restivo Glassner

E Langley Beautifully said. I feel the same enjoyment, yet with distance. The first season wrapped me up fully in it's tv arms lol.

Bassel Said
Screenwriter & Author from Egypt – Passionate about Dark Fantasy & Psychological Thrillers

Hi Stage 32 Community! My name is Bassel Said, and I’m a screenwriter and author based in Egypt. I’m thrilled to join this talented network of creatives! Writing has always been my way of exploring the complex depths of the human psyche. I am particularly drawn to Psychological Horror and Dark Fanta...

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Bassel Said! Welcome to the community. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge. You can promote your...

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Mark Films
Finish Your Script!

2026 Writing Goals?

Just a friendly reminder from the late Mr Hitchcock

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for the reminder, Mark Films and Mr. Hitchcock. One of my goals this year is sell 1-3 feature scripts. What's your goal(s), Mark?

Mark Films

Same here Maurice Vaughan I really want to see the breakthrough this year with 3+ scripts sold. Just gotta keep grinding! Have a great week.

Mark Films

How are everyones writing goals for 2026 going?

Bartosz Koliński
Question about sharing writing work-in-progress

Hi everyone,

I’ve been on this platform for a little while and I was wondering about one thing.

Is it a good idea to share my current writing work-in-progress here? If so, what’s the best way to do it?

Maurice Vaughan

Talk about your project and your progress, Bartosz Koliński. That's what I do.

Stephen Folker

Make sure it's copyrighted first. And just exercise caution. Not everyone is out to steal your idea, but it does happen.

Bartosz Koliński

Stephen Folker Hi. that's very important advice, thank you

Bartosz Koliński

Maurice Vaughan Okay, how do I make it not look like pitching? I want to share my work, not just sale it. What I want to say is how to do it so that it doesn't look like just an advertisement...

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Maurice Vaughan

Bartosz Koliński You could write something like "I'm outlining my Comedy feature screenplay" or "I got to page 50 of my Action feature screenplay" and talk about how your script is going, what challen...

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Geoffroy Faugerolas
The importance of matchmaking

Picking the Right Executive Is More Important Than Having a Perfect Script. I've watched hundreds of writers pitch over the years, and here's a pattern I see constantly:

Writer A: Great script. Pitches to any executive who's available. Gets polite passes. Wonders why nobody's interested.

Writer B: Goo...

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Geoffroy Faugerolas

CJ Walley Couldn't agree more. It can be tricky when a producer with 20 action movies under their belt now is asking for a rom-com but this is why one can never rest on their laurels; It's all about g...

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Geoffroy Faugerolas

@meriem love to hear this. We're all learning and here to support one another.

Geoffroy Faugerolas

Libby Wright so glad to hear! Sometimes we'll recommend an executive, sometimes a special initiative, a contest, perhaps a polish or share notes/thoughts on the material...everyone's path is unique; t...

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Libby Wright

Yes Geoffroy Faugerolas! Y'all are super heroes and it's so great that we have experts like you on our team that can help us tailor the resources we focus on!...

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Ayesha Simra

As a newbie to film industry as a script writer, this kind of info is liquid gold. But, how do we reach out to executives in the industry, especially if we do not have connections. So we make connections first or by contests or referrals also how would this be for a foreign person.

Jim Fisher
How To Write an Ensemble Cast Film

In the introductory comments the word ensemble should be pronounced änˈsämb(ə)l, not E semble!.

Ryan Wilford
Hi Creative Family! Happy Wednesday!

​I wanted to share a progress update. I’m currently 30 pages or so away from finishing the latest rewrite of my psychological thriller, Confidence. This pass has been all about the "feel" of the pacing—ensuring the "boom boom boom" action moments hit just as hard as the slow-burn suspense.

​While fin...

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Ryan Wilford

Thanks! @Kobe likewise. Take care.

Ryan Wilford

@Mikey, I appreciate that! And likewise, good luck with any current and future projects.

Shaun Jackson Williams

Thank you for this — it’s a question I’ve been sitting with myself as I finish a polished draft of my spec. I’ve been using a lot of my own “Shaunism tools” to stay grounded in the work: world‑buildin...

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Ryan Wilford.

Ryan Wilford

@Shaun, hi! Thank you for taking the time to share your insight, I appreciate it. I agree with everything mentioned. I love sharing my process and journey with others as well as hearing theirs. I'm fi...

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Lily Bunny. Welcome to the community. It's hard to read the picture in both of your posts. Maybe paste the info in your post. You can edit your post by clicking the downward arrow to the right of...

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Maurice Vaughan
Stage 32 Lodge: Monday on Main St. in Park City!

Stage 32 Lodge: Monday has become a true networking staple over the years, where Stage 32 Members can go for great conversations over a drink, introductions that turn into relationships, and ideas that move from “maybe someday” to “let’s follow up.”

Where: The Cabin, Park City, UT

When: Monday, Jan...

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Shahin Rashidhashemi
When the screenplay is “fully grown” — what comes next?

I’ve been thinking about screenwriting lately as something very close to gardening.

You plant an idea.

You prepare the soil.

You water it with drafts.

You prune with rewrites.

You wait through seasons of growth.

And eventually, one day, you look at your screenplay and feel:

This is the ripe fruit....

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Maurice Vaughan

You're right, Shahin Rashidhashemi. Screenwriting is very close to gardening.

#1. You can network/build relationships, pitch your script, enter contests, submit your script to managers and agents (I su...

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Deborah Bete
Looking for feedback on a feature logline

I’m currently refining the logline for a feature I’m developing and would genuinely appreciate feedback from fellow writers.

A French woman and a famous American man live a quiet collision in New York. Over many hours, an unspoken connection grows — testing desire and restraint.

Does this clearly conv...

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Howard Koor

Try In New York, a burned-out French executive and disillusioned movie star walk away from their carefully constructed lives and collide by chance. Over the course of one adventurous afternoon, a two-...

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Chase Carmichael

Bonjour, mademoiselle Bete. My thought, in a bipedal anthropomorphic world of New York City. A French female blue mouse named Angelique Clausier who just moved to New York to explore her dream of owni...

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E Langley

A French woman and famous American man who spend an unplanned afternoon together in New York are forced to confront whether they can return to the lives they were living.

Deborah Bete

Howard Koor and E Langley thanks so much for sharing these loglines -- really appreciate it!...

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Howard Koor

Happy to contribute:))

Casey Newel
Period Piece writing

What are the odds that historical feature films will make a big return? When was the last time you were interested in watching an American Civil War film? Historically, the amount of period piece/western films have been tracked to be less likely to be made over the last 30 years… it is hard to track...

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Amanda Toney

I think we're actually seeing some light! Japan's biggest live action film this year was a 3 HOUR (yes 3 hours!) period piece movie KOKUHO that the've submitted as their Oscar contender. And, A24 pick...

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David Taylor

Historic cowboy series are perceived to have been grossly misrepresenting of history. They also do not sit well with current societal values if recreating those myths. Recent dramas seek to right that...

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Jim Boston

Casey, I'd like to take a stab at it.

I keep reading that production companies (especially American ones) shy away from period pieces because they're more expensive to make than contemporary stories.

T...

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CJ Walley

I rewrote a Civil War film that we shot in late 2024. The politics are too incendiary right now, but the setting is powerful, and there's a lot of interesting drama within it.

Judith Pajer

Period films struggle when they feel like observation instead of participation.

The ones that endure treat history as a setting, not the subject, grounding the story in desire, contradiction, and inte...

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