Hussni Mörsare: Music composer and screenwriter in Kalix, Sweden.

I'm trying to find good examples of screenplays where one show a characters thoughts as a scene, visually. For example - A guy sits in a bar, smile to the other guy but in his mind he jumps him and hits his head onto the bar counter.

How would one write that, clean and correctly formatted?

Hi everyone!

So I'm sitting here reading about different ways about structuring your script, but somewhat struggling to get a good workflow creating it for TV.

Say I'm writing a Pilot, 30 min episode and wondering if there is a smart way/method you use to map out an episode. Similar to Snyder's Save the Cat. What key elements would have to be in there (30 min) to make it work?

Lets assume I have a solid story, characters and enough legs to build a show with 5 seasons. How do I actually map out, plan and build each episode? Since I'm an ADHD head I tend to get lost in my inspiration and need a more (safe) orginized way to keep a straight road.

Anyone had the same problem?

Hi all :) Just started a writerduet account. Anybody using it? I am not sure how to collaborate in it. Can someone clarify??

Hello, I recently finished my first full-length movie script on about 110 pages. I was gonna send the script to a producer friend of mine, but before I'm sending it anywhere I was hoping to get some feedback from someone who knows the business and recognizes flaws when they see it. Is there anyone interested in helping me out? Maybe take a look at what to improve, how the story plays out, and the logistics of it. I am fully aware that there are services that do just that, but if anyone would be interested in helping out, let me know. If so, message me here at Stage32 and we'll make it happen. Best regards, Hussni.

Since I've recently come across some personal issues in my life I find it hard to get back to my old routine when it comes to writing, was sitting and thinking "Wonder how other people do in their creative moments" . Since i'm not earning a living on my writing (yet) I have to take the moments where I can but finding it hard to actually finding my "new" routine to make it work. My question is, How do you fit your passion of writing into your daily lives? And how can a creative day look like to you?

Just wanted to say hi, just found the site and must say that so far i'm loving it. I'm a happy amateur screenwriter from Sweden, and since i'm fairly new to being a screenwriter I would really like to get in contact with someone who wont mind giving a few pointers to my scripts.

Hello Hussni! Thanks for connecting with me! How are your scripts coming along? I have a few great screenwriting articles on my old website. http://filmschoolnow.com/Articles.html

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Hello everyone, I've recently finished my first full script on about 170 pages (still adding/deleting scenes) but would love some input on the synopsis, what do you think about the story? Is there something bothering you in the synopsis? I started this project about 10 months ago but have had it on "rest" for the last 7 months I think it was, I wrote on it every day, several pages a day and just had so much inspiration while writing it until I went into a wall when finishing it and had to leave it for a while. Now i've gotten the spark back and was thinking of doing the final touch on it, cleaning it up a bit then sending it to someone who can help me with the grammar and such since english is not my first language. Between my regular job and being a father to a 10 month baby I'm having a hard time getting anything done, and since my biggest enemy is myself when it comes to self criticism i've never actually shown it to anyone so I've never heard a single comment about the story. Talk about sidetracking, anyway, some input on the synopsis would be much appreciated! "GENRE: Comedy LOGLINE: One of the survivors from a sinking luxury cruise wakes up on the shores of Cuba mistaking it to be a lonely island. Together with the most annoying man alive they find themselves being stuck in the middle of an ongoing drug operation in the backyard of the biggest drug lord in Cuba. Being witnesses they must try to work together to get out alive. SYNOPSIS: David Strand, a 45 year old post office worker is a walking cliché with a dead end job and a loveless marriage. One day he meets the annoying gasstation clerk Ed who talks David into entering a competition to win a luxury cruise to the Bahamas. When winning the competition David realize he has no one to take along on the trip so he gives one of the tickets to Ed, insisting that they go separate. While on the ship David has no choise but to share the cabin with Ed and is having a hard time to act like he's enjoying Ed's company. The ship suddenly starts to take in water and goes down in the middle of the ocean leaving almost no survivors. David wakes up on a lonely island thinking he's alone with no food or water when he suddenly understand that the only other person alive is Ed. They try to find a way back home when they realize that they are not on a lonely island but in fact on Cuba, in the middle of an ongoing drug operation. Stuck in the backyard of one of the biggest drug lords in Cuba they are now witnesses and must try to work together to get out alive. Posing as important american drug lords the Cubans fall for it and they meet Elise, the hostage in the warehouse, who they realize might be the only one who can help them out." Best regards, a happy amateur from Sweden.

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