THE LIGHTSMITH OF ASTERION: AWAKENING LIGHT-QC.MOV
Quality Check in Progress: New Illustrative Edition of “The Lightsmith of Asterion: Awakening Light” (Pre‑Pitch, 98‑Page Screenplay)
I’m currently putting the new illustrative edition of my project, “The Lightsmith of Asterion: Awakening Light,” through a detailed quality check as it’s being adapted and reformatted into a 98‑page screenplay that’s now in the development pipeline (pre‑pitch phase).
This piece started as a novel–screenplay hybrid—designed from day one not just for readers, but specifically with actors, directors, and production teams in mind. The illustrative edition is meant to serve as a bridge between reading the world and seeing how it can live on screen.
What the Quality Check Focuses On
I’m treating this QC pass like a mini development lab, with attention on:
Story & Structural Clarity
Ensuring the hybrid format (prose + script-style passages) reads cleanly and tracks with a conventional 98‑page screenplay structure.
Tight alignment between chapter/sequence breaks and the screenplay’s act and beat structure.
Illustration & Visual Storytelling Alignment
Checking that each illustration supports a key cinematic moment, tone shift, or character beat, rather than just decorating the page.
Verifying consistency of visual motifs, environments, and character design so they can translate cleanly into production design and storyboards.
Readability for Actors & Directors
Making sure dialogue-driven sections and script-formatted passages give clear emotional and performance cues without over-directing on the page.
Confirming that blocking, transitions, and visual emphasis in the illustrative edition map logically to how they’ll read in the shooting script.
Production Awareness
Keeping an eye on scope, locations, and repeatable sets so the illustrated moments line up with realistic production considerations.
Making sure the hybrid format can function as a lookbook + blueprint for potential collaborators, not just as a reading experience.
Where This Is in the Pipeline
Illustrative edition: in final quality check for clarity, pacing, and visual cohesion.
Screenplay: locked at 98 pages, currently in development / pre‑pitch—preparing materials for outreach to producers, directors, and reps.
Invitation to the Stage32 Community
I’m using this QC stage to refine how the project is presented to industry eyes:
Actors: Is the material actor-friendly and emotionally playable on the page?
Directors: Does the illustrative edition help you “see” the film and its visual language?
Producers / Production: Does the hybrid format support conversations around scope, look, and feasibility?