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"Don't Fall In" (Thriller Feature Script)

My goals for November Write Club are to finish my Thriller script "Don't Fall In" and finish a writing job. I'm about halfway done with the first draft of "Don't Fall In." I might add more goals throughout November.

This is a mock poster I made for the script.

The blog for the 8th Annual November Writ...

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Maurice Vaughan

FINAL NWC UPDATE!

My goals starting November Write Club were to finish my Thriller script "Don't Fall In" (my main goal) and finish a writing job. I completed the writing job, and I wrote some pages fo...

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Geoff Hall

Maurice Vaughan wow, Maurice, that’s quite a productive month. Well done.

I was happy to finish the draft of the short film script!

Well done to everyone who contributed to this wonderful community of...

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Geoff Hall. Congratulations again on finishing the draft of your short film script! Congratulations to everyone who made progress on their NWC goals and those who finished! Looking forward to...

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Maurice Vaughan
My November Write Club Goals

I have two goals for November Write Club. Finish rewriting a Horror Action feature script and outline & write a short script.

Here's an early poster for my Horror Action script.

Check out Week 1's blog for NWC (www.stage32.com/blog/november-write-club-week-1-how-to-find-build-the-cr.... Write Club is...

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Maurice Vaughan

That's pretty cool, Lawrence Whitener! What kind of project is that?

Kseniia Zhuravleva

I just finished the outline for my new script, and tomorrow I’m starting to write it! I hope to have the first draft done by the end of November.

Making posters for my scripts really motivates me — it makes the project feel real. Here’s the poster for my new script.

Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations on finishing your outline, Kseniia Zhuravleva! I'm rooting for you to finish the first draft by the end of the month!

John Mezes
November Write Club!

It's week 2 of November Write Club! How is everyone doing with your goals?

John Mezes

That's the spirit and the resolve, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh! I like your optimism about NWC and reaching your goal.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thank you Maurice Vaughan and John Mezes! It’s definitely been a busy month so far and Finding Elpis is almost done editing lol. Can’t wait to finish Rondo of Pandora so it can get a table read~...

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh.

Maurice Vaughan
Everything I Did for Stage 32’s November Write Club

Everything I Did for Stage 32’s November Write Club

– I did three drafts of my Horror Action feature script I’m rewriting called Vampire-Proof.

– Rewrote my Horror Action feature script Kill the Monster.

– I turned my Crime Thriller short script into a Sci-Fi Thriller short script and made new pitch...

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Maurice Vaughan

That's great, Maria Restivo Glassner! Congratulations on rewriting your one-sheet, finishing your first draft of Act I, and progressing! Are you taking the animation class on Stage 32?...

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Maria Restivo Glassner

Maurice Vaughan Yes, it's with Evan Anglin. Great class.

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Maria Restivo Glassner. I'll keep an eye out for Evan Anglin's classes in the future.

My November Write Club Goal

My November Write Club Goal is to finish rewriting a Crime/Comedy/Holidays feature script titled "ROByn" and start pitching it by the end of Nov.

My original goal was to finish it and pitch it this week (week of Nov 1), but I worked on/finished another feature project (that's going to make two feat...

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Maurice Vaughan

I've seen "The November Man," Colette "ByFilms" Byfield. It was a while ago.

Becky Balsano

I love the "ROByn" concept. I hope Nov. brought some good writing Maurice!

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Becky. "ROByn" is in rewrites. How are you doing?

Maurice Vaughan
My November Write Club Goals – Week 3 Update

Goal #1 – Finish a Holiday Horror feature script that I already outlined (a script draft that's in shape to get feedback on)

Goal #2 – Outline and write a Horror Comedy short script called Ghost Roach

Goal #3 – Outline a Horror/Action/Zombie feature script

I reached goals #2 and #3. I’m on page 58 of...

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, GJ Harvey. Which of your scripts is the feedback for?

GJ Harvey

Maurice Vaughan “Still in Time” which made the semis this year. Got some insightful feedback to work on.

Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations, GJ Harvey! Still in Time has one of the most unique concepts I've seen!

Maurice Vaughan
My November Write Club Goal

My goal for November Write Club is finish rewriting a Horror Action feature script, and I already have my plan. I might add some more goals, like outline and write a short script.

Are you joining NWC? Screenwriters, TV writers, authors, directors, producers, actors, and more can join.

What's your goal...

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Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations on finishing the polish, Lisa Weiss! I hope you enjoy your break! Keep us posted on your scripts.

Lisa Weiss

@Maurice Vaughan Thanks! I always need to take a week or two off after a heavy polish.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Lisa Weiss. I usually start a new project after finishing one, but I take a break sometimes. Sometimes a day, two days, a week, etc.

Leonardo Ramirez
Happy November Write Club, everyone!

Over time, I’ve been fortunate to receive a recommend on each of the scripts in my portfolio—with one even earning a double recommend.

For my November Write Club goal, I’ll be focusing on writing knockout query letters for each script while researching managers to find the best fit to reach out to.

What are your goals this month?

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thanks Maurice Vaughan! 30 will be a cinch, the new characters and situations are proving lots of fun, and there's more than a little drama and conflict lol (it's what happens when you have a lot on y...

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh. I'm not sure if you've read this blog or not, but Nathan Waire set up a table read for his script, using 100% of the talent through Stage 32. www.stage32.com/blo...

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

I will read it Maurice Vaughan, and someday I'll try to have a Stage32-based table read as well :D

Leonardo Ramirez
Set Yourself Up For Success With The 9th Annual November Write Club by Emily J!

We’ll be officially launching November Write Club next week on Wednesday, November 1, here on the blog. When we do, your first task will be to state your November goal.

For more, check out Emily’s blog post here:

https://www.stage32.com/blog/set-yourself-up-for-success-with-the-9th-an......

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Leonardo Ramirez

Interesting, Geoff Hall. Do you have a logline for it?

Karen "Kay" Ross

Y'all, this is one of my FAVORITE events each year! I started out doing NaNoWriMo, but if you're not writing a novel, then the goal doesn't really serve your needs. So, I LOVE that we've adapted the s...

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Geoff Hall

Leonardo Ramirez nope, but it follows a writer who is seeing a therapist and is told that he’s suffering from an anonymity complex…

Leonardo Ramirez
Set Yourself Up For Success With The 9th Annual November Write Club by Emily J!

We’ll be officially launching November Write Club next week on Wednesday, November 1, here on the blog. When we do, your first task will be to state your November goal.

For more, check out Emily’s blog post here:

https://www.stage32.com/blog/set-yourself-up-for-success-with-the-9th-an......

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Geoff Hall

Maurice Vaughan well done, Maurice, that’s great to hear that you’ve made progress with your targets. Not so much then like a downhill skiing event where the fastest wins, but more of a slalom where y...

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks, Geoff Hall. I really appreciate it. I'm thinking about switching to a different script for December (than my NWC script). Either way, I'm gonna get some writing done!...

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Geoff Hall

Maurice Vaughan nice one!

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