POCKET KNIFE
By Rehaan Riyasdeen EXT. SCHOOL - SECLUDED AND ABANDONED AREA -- LUNCH BREAK
Behind all the large portables, controlling teachers and immature
students was a rather large plain. The grass wasn't green, the trees
weren’t in sight and the rocks and sticks were sharp enough to cut
through a metal rod.
Nature didn’t utter a word, students didn’t utter a word and
teachers weren’t in sight. This area was covered by large portables,
and the points of entry were very limited.
Despite the peaceful and tranquil feel this place emitted, two boys,
Vikram and Tony, were using it as a boxing ring.
Vikram’s face was covered with blood, Tony untouched. They each
exchange a number of punches, none of them making an impact. Tony
throws Vikram to the floor, Vikram tries to grab onto something, but
he can’t reach.
The camera starts to shake making it impossible to see either one of
the boys.
Vikram is then seen standing over Tony with a knife in his hand,
staring him down.
CUT TO BLACK
POCKET KNIFE
FADE IN:
INT. SCHOOL - CLASSROOM
ENTIRE CLASS
Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to you, Happy Birthday dear
Sarah, Happy birthday to you.
The entire class begins clapping. VIKRAM is looking at SARAH. She
looks back at him. Vikram smiles. Sarah looks around before smiling
back. The school bell rings.
INT. SCHOOL BUS -- AFTER SCHOOL
Vikram is standing in the bus, wearing headphones. The whole bus is
crowded. Sarah is also on the bus. Vikram and Sarah make eye contact. After several stops, the bus slowly empties until it is
only Vikram and Sarah in the bus.
VIKRAM
How many more stops till you get off?
SARAH
5 more.
Vikram
Oh, same as me. Also, Happy Birthday, how old are you now?
SARAH
I’m pretty sure you shouldn’t ask girls that.
VIKRAM
To be honest, I don’t even understand why? Maybe you’re right, what
do I know?
Vikram faces away from Sarah and lounges on the bus seat for a
while.
SARAH
18.
VIKRAM
Huh? you talking to me?
SARAH
Yeah, just that I turned 18 today.
VIKRAM
Oh,ok. Well anyway, I kinda got you a present
SARAH
For what?
VIKRAM
Your birthday. I know we’re not close friends or anything, maybe
this could help speed up the process.
SARAH
Umm, Okay. But if you are looking for a relationship or -
VIKRAM Don’t say anything! I don’t wanna know. Just open the present. Tell
me if you like it.
Vikram hands Sarah a red box with her name on it. Sarah opens it and
sees a Pocket Knife laying on the base of the box with her name
engraved into it.
VIKRAM
I know it’s kind of random, but I find it easier to remember random
things.
SARAH
I guess so.
Vikram’s phone starts ringing, it’s his friend JACK.
VIKRAM
Sorry, one sec.
Vikram answers the phone.
VIKRAM
Yo, what’s up.
JACK
Nothing much, wanna hang out later? I got somthin to tell you
VIKRAM
Nah bro, I can’t. I’m at my grandma’s.
JACK
Oh aight, calm.
Vikram puts the phone back in his pocket
SARAH
That’s a little weird, I’ve been told I look older than my age, but
I’m not sure.
VIKRAM
Huh?
SARAH
Doesn’t matter. If I explain it, it’s not funny.
VIKRAM Okay, but for the record, my grandma used to look really good back
in the day.
SARAH
But why did you lie to Jack?
VIKRAM
I just didn’t feel like going. That’s just my go-to response.
SARAH
Sure, okay,
SARAH
Anyway, that’s our stop.
VIKRAM
Oh yeah.
Both of them get off the bus facing each other.
SARAH
One last thing. You probably shouldn’t have told me your excuse.
VIKRAM
Why?
SARAH
Cause now you can’t use it on me.
VIKRAM
I’d never want to.
SARAH
Okay then, wanna hang out today.
VIKRAM
Nah I can’t, I’m at my grandma’s. But I’ll be back at 7.
SARAH
Perfect. Where do you wanna go?
VIKRAM
Maccas or something?
SARAH
Fine by me. Sarah hangs up the phone and both of them walk away. Vikram calls
his brother, Arjun.
VIKRAM
Yo Jun. Can you pick me up?
ARJUN
Where you at?
VIKRAM
I went like 10 stops too far.
ARJUN
Nah, get your ass home yourself.
Vikram frowns and stomps in frustration. Vikram puts on his
headphones and starts listening to music.
CUT TO.
EXT. SCHOOL - SECLUDED AND ABANDONED AREA -- LUNCH BREAK
Vikram is staring intently at the camera, he has blood dripping down
his face.
VIKRAM
Where is she?
Vikram says in a cold, menacing tone. Jack responds from behind the
camera.
JACK
H-Holy Shit. W-what the fuck just happened! Bro, what did you do!
Vikram turns around and sees a girl running away.
CUT TO.
INT. MCDONALDS - 7:30
Vikram is sitting in a booth in McDonalds, the shop is filled to the
brim with people, but Vikram is all alone. He checks his watch, the
time is 7:30. He opens his phone and calls Jack. VIKRAM
Yo bro, I’m back home, wanna go maccas. I’m there right now.
JACK
Yeah of course bro. You good?
VIKRAM
Yeah, why?
JACK
Ion know, something off with your voice.
VIKRAM
Bro I ain’t sick.
JACK
Nah, not like that, whatever, I’ll be there.
Vikram hangs up the phone. He opens his messages with Sarah, his
fingers hover over the keyboard. He then types.
VIKRAM
Where are you?
Jack enters the shop and sits in the booth with Vikram.
VIKRAM
Damn, what the fuck, for a fatass your crazy quick.
JACK
Nah, I was on my way here.
VIKRAM
That’s more like it.
Vikram laughs to himself and Jack smiles back.
VIKRAM
What you wanna tell me before.
JACK
When?
VIKRAM
When you called. JACK
Oh yeah, you know Sarah.
VIKRAM
Yeah, what about her.
JACK
Well anyway, her and Tony are dating, so just leave it.
VIKRAM
You sure. Because she literally asked me to hang out with her today.
JACK
I don’t know man, but there’s a reason I’m here, not her.
VIKRAM
Maybe. But I thought it was going well.
JACK
It’s alright. Also my brother told me this after I got my ass
rejected by Stephanie.
VIKRAM
What?
JACK
He was like, It doesn’t matter how many shots you miss through the
game, you just can’t miss the final one.
Vikram laughs.
JACK
What? It’s low key pretty good -
Vikram’s phone starts ringing.
VIKRAM
Yo shut up, It’s Sarah.
JACK
Bro, just leave it.
VIKRAM
What about your big quote, maybe this is the final shot.
JACK You’re just being delusional.
VIKRAM
Alright whatever.
Vikram picks up the phone.
SARAH
Vikram.
VIKRAM
Yeah.
SARAH
I’m so sorry I didn’t meet you. But I want to talk to you. Can we
meet up?
VIKRAM
Okay sure, where?
SARAH
I’ll send you the address, can you come to my house? I’ll wait
outside.
VIKRAM
Okay.
Vikram hangs up the phone.
VIKRAM
Gotta go man, see ya.
Vikram runs out of the store.
JACK
Bye.
CUT TO.
EXT. OUTSIDE SARAH’S HOUSE – NIGHT TIME
Sarah is standing on the front steps of her house, Vikram is
standing on the sidewalk, he stares into her eyes and just smiles.
She smiles back, but not with the same intent.
SARAH Vikram, I have a boyfriend. I should’ve told you before.
VIKRAM
I know.
SARAH
Then why did you come?
VIKRAM
I just wanted to.
SARAH
Why aren’t you mad?
VIKRAM
Why should I be?
SARAH
I don’t know, I thought you would be.
VIKRAM
There’s this thing I wanna try, just say the first thing that comes
to mind.
SARAH
What?
VIKRAM
do it.
SARAH
Okay.
VIKRAM
Bat.
SARAH
Man.
VIKRAM
Happy.
SARAH
Sad.
VIKRAM Tall.
SARAH
Short.
VIKRAM
Okay, lemme do full sentences. I use Insta-
SARAH
Gram.
VIKRAM
I like Net-
SARAH
Flix.
VIKRAM
I love you.
SARAH
Vikram.
Vikram gives Sarah a cheeky grin.
VIKRAM
Most girls say “Tube.”
SARAH
These stupid games are useless, I don’t love you. Stop Vikram. I
barely know you.
VIKRAM
I’ll try to believe you. But let’s have a deal, if you meet Tony,
will I be there? if you’re right next to him, will he be there when
your eyes close? if he isn’t, call me.
SARAH
You gotta be kidding me.
VIKRAM
Yes, or No. SARAH
Okay. Yes.
VIKRAM
Alright, I’ll go home now, but when you walk back, try not to turn
around. Tony won’t like it.
SARAH
Not tryna burst your bubble, but it’s better to be proud after you
win, only an idiot does it in reverse.
VIKRAM
Then I’m a lovable idiot.
SARAH
You really believe all the bullshit your mum tells you.
Sarah and Vikram both smile at each other. They both walk back their
respective ways, then they both turn around to get one last glance.
Vikram smiles at Sarah.
INT. TONY’S CAR - LATE NIGHT
Sarah and Tony are sitting together in a car, Tony is driving, Sarah
in the passenger seat.
TONY
Somehow we were actually able to get to the front and then me and
Tommy climbed up onto the wait, are you listening to me?
SARAH
Yeah, of course I am.
TONY
Fine, what I say.
SARAH
Something about you getting to the front.
TONY
Of what?
SARAH
Uhh, Of life? TONY
You have to be fucking with me Sarah!
SARAH
Sorry Tony.
TONY
What were you thinking about? Actually the better question is who
you were thinking about.
SARAH
Nobody, I just haven’t gotten much sleep this week, I got a lot of
tests that I was studying all night.
SARAH
Something you wouldn’t know about
Sarah muttered to herself.
TONY
Okay, just close your eyes for a little bit.
SARAH
Thank you Tony.
Sarah closes her eyes, the audience can not see a single thing, but
they can hear the different things Vikram spoke about.
INT. TONY’S CAR –- GAS STATION
Sarah opens her eyes, the car is completely empty, she looks out the
window and sees Vikram there.
SARAH
What?
Vikram waves at Sarah. Sarah opens the car door. SARAH
What do you want?
VIKRAM
Nothing, just came to say hi.
SARAH
You said it now, go.
VIKRAM
Why are you mad? I didn’t reject you.
SARAH
I don’t want to talk to you, and while it’s none of your business,
I’m with Tony, not you. You can keep talking about you being in my
head or whatever, but you’re not.
VIKRAM
Okay sure, but I’m not switching my phone on silent.
SARAH
Ugh, what can I even do about you, go home.
VIKRAM
Okay, good night.
SARAH
Goodbye.
Vikram closes the car door and walks towards the gas station before
running into Tony. What was said is inaudible but Tony stands up
close to Vikram, getting in his face, he then pushes Vikram, Vikram
takes a few steps back but doesn’t retaliate. Tony comes to the car,
Vikram hasn’t left yet. Tony opens Sarah’s door.
TONY
Get out.
SARAH
What? TONY
Get out. The bollywood star over here will take you home.
SARAH
You are one hell of an asshole.
TONY
You’re one hell of a… nevermind.
SARAH
Yeah, that’s what I thought.
Sarah gets out of the car and walks toward Vikram.
TONY
See ya Sarah, Safe Travels, might need it?
SARAH
Go home Tony.
TONY
I’m not going home, the night is still alive.
Tony smiles at Sarah and sticks his tongue out.
SARAH
Shut the fuck up.
Sarah walks over to Vikram and Tony speeds away.
SARAH
What did you say to him? VIKRAM
Nothing. I didn’t open my mouth. I can take you home if you need.
SARAH
Thank you Vikram. I’m sorry for Tony.
VIKRAM
Don’t worry about it.
INT. VIKRAM’S CAR
Vikram and Sarah are driving down the street.
SARAH
I’m pretty sure we should be at my house.
VIKRAM
Oh, I think I made a wrong turn.
Vikram smiles at Sarah.
SARAH
You should give up on me Vikram. You have a beautiful smile, show it
to another girl.
VIKRAM
You’re the only one who brings it out.
SARAH
Wow. I don’t even know how to react.
VIKRAM
Just smile.
Sarah smiles back at Vikram.
SARAH
If you want we can go to Maccas now, since I blew you off before.
VIKRAM
Sorry, I’m at my grandma's, but if you want we can just drive around
for a while. SARAH
Sure. Why do you even like me, Vikram?
VIKRAM
I don’t know, it just plays out well in my head.
SARAH
Also, the knife you gave me has blood on it.
VIKRAM
Oh no, it isn’t blood. I just put some sauce on it.
SARAH
Why?
VIKRAM
I don’t know, cause you like pierced through my heart, it was corny
so I didn’t say it.
SARAH
Good judgement call.
Sarah laughs.
VIKRAM
We’re at your house, do you wanna get dropped off?
SARAH
No, but I think I should.
VIKRAM
Okay. I’ve been to your house twice in one day.
SARAH
Yeah, I might have a stalker.
VIKRAM
Where do you think he is? SARAH
I have no Idea.
VIRKAM
Sarah, I can live with being friends, but do I have to? This is the
last time I’ll ask.
SARAH
Good night Vikram.
Sarah gets out of the car.
VIKRAM
This was a good night.
Vikram drives away, listening to music in the car when he gets a
phone call from Sarah.
SARAH
Vikram.
VIKRAM
Sarah?
SARAH
I was trying to go to sleep, I closed my eyes, but there wasn’t one
moment I saw Darkness, Tony or even myself.
VIKRAM
Are you okay? Why did you call?
SARAH
To hold up my end of our deal. That’s all I wanted to say.
VIKRAM
That’s all I wanted to hear.
Sarah hangs up the phone, Vikram notices that Sarah forgets the
knife in his car, but Vikram uncontrollably smiles to himself and
sings along to the music playing. Vikram gets another call, this
time from Tony. TONY
Vikram, I just got a call from Sarah. I’m not mad, but what
happened?
VIKRAM
What do you mean?
TONY
What.Happened.
VIKRAM
We just drove around a little and talked.
TONY
About what? Going to her place together, maybe kissing, maybe
VIKRAM
Stop!
TONY
Am I wrong
VIKRAM
Yeah you’re wrong. What do you want?
TONY
I want to know what you told her to make her break up with me.
VIKRAM
Think about it differently Tony, maybe it was you, not me.
TONY
Sure whatever.
VIKRAM
Alright see ya.
TONY
Nah, I got one more question. What did she tell you when she called
you?
VIKRAM
She never called me. TONY
She said she did. She said she just called you after calling me.
VIKRAM
She said she wants to get together with me.
TONY
say no.
VIKRAM
Why?
TONY
I want you to. I’m not letting you of all people steal a girl from
me.
VIKRAM
What’s that supposed to mean?
TONY
It means I’d rather let Jack steal a girl from me over you.
VIKRAM
Why?
TONY
Something about you. You just piss me the fuck off.
VIKRAM
Flattered. But that makes me wanna say yes more.
TONY
Know what? I dare you.
VIKRAM
You gotta be kidding me, shut your corny ass up!
TONY
Fine, if you're gonna go ahead and do it, but don’t let people find
out.
VIKRAM
Alright, I ain’t here to start shit. TONY
Good. Thanks.
Vikram hangs up the phone.
EXT. SCHOOL –-LUNCHTIME
Vikram is lining up at the cantin by himself, Sarah comes over to
him.
SARAH
Hi, last night was nice. Do you wanna hang out now.
VIKRAM
No.
SARAH
Why?
VIKRAM
I’ll message you later.
Suddenly Tony comes up behind Sarah.
TONY
Sarah, so good to see you. Come with me, I need to show you
something.
Vikram looks at Tony, then looks at Sarah.
VIKRAM
Go.
Vikram mouths.
SARAH
Alright.
Sarah and Tony walk away. Vikram leaves the Cantin line. He follows
Sarah and Tony. and sees both of them go to the back of the school.
Jack comes up behind Vikram and taps him on the shoulder.
JACK
What you looking at. Vikram turns around.
VIKRAM
Come with me.
JACK
Where?
VIKRAM
Come.
EXT. SCHOOL - SECLUDED AND ABANDONED AREA -- LUNCH BREAK
Vikram and Jack walk to the back of the school and see both of them
back at where the film starts. Sarah is backed up against the wall
and Tony is standing in front of her ruffling through her hair.
TONY
What earth can you see in him, you can barely see him.
SARAH
Tony, stop.
TONY
No I won’t.
Tony then grabs Sarah’s jaw and tries to kiss her.
SARAH
Stop Tony! Stop you fucking creep!
TONY
Looks like the invisible fucking prince isn’t here.
Sarah sees Vikram
SARAH
Vikram, get him off me!
Tony turns around and sees Vikram
TONY
Piss off! Now where were we.
VIKRAM
Get the fuck off her!
TONY
I’m shivering in my fucking boots. I dare you to hit me once.
Vikram walks up to Tony and Sarah. Vikram pauses for a moment
TONY
Do it pussy!
Vikram punches Tony in the mouth. Jack pulls out his phone and
starts recording. The start of the film starts playing, but this
time when Vikram is standing over Tony, he stabs Tony using the
knife. Vikram doesn’t pull out the knife.
Vikram is staring intently at the camera, he has blood dripping down
his face.
VIKRAM
Where is she?
Vikram says in a cold, menacing tone. Jack responds from behind the
camera.
JACK
H-Holy Shit. W-what the fuck just happened! Bro, what did you do!
Vikram turns around and sees a girl running away.
Vikram runs away and jumps over the fence. Jack zooms into the body
and the knife stabbed into Tony is the Pocket Knife Vikram gifted
Sarah.
JACK
Holy sh-shit, I gotta get the f-fuck outta here.
Hi, @Howard! Welcome to the community. It's great to meet you. Congratulations on all your success in theater, dance, and live performance!
Stage 32 has a great Composing Lounge (www.stage32.com/lounge...
Expand commentHi, @Howard! Welcome to the community. It's great to meet you. Congratulations on all your success in theater, dance, and live performance!
Stage 32 has a great Composing Lounge (www.stage32.com/lounge/composing).
I'm writing a Faith-based Sports Action feature script and outlining a Faith-based Crime Action feature script.
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Your background is truly impressive. Wishing you many great collaborations and exciting scoring opportunities ahead!